Do you find it difficult to begin writing your family's history? If so, watch this new series on the Write Your Family History YouTube Channel. Watching the drafting process step-by-step will help you overcome writer's block. Each month, one viewer's submission to the Family History Writing Challenge will be selected and I'll transform their genealogical document into a rough draft, in under two hours. The resulting story will be available on the blog (grammatical errors and all) and the process video will be available below. June's Submission June Butka submitted the following obituary and challenged me to turn it into a family story. Newspapers are great for genealogical details, and obituaries seem like there isn't more to add. If you think that, then you'll be sorely mistaken. In the accompanying video, the brief obituary is expanded to 735 words. This is just the beginning, as further explanations and research are required by June to complete the fleshing out of the draft. Rearrange an Obituary to a Family Story Draft-in-Progress To begin writing, the initial step is to transcribe all the details from a genealogical record. Following this, the next step involves rearranging those details into a coherent flow. This is particularly important when dealing with sources that only list facts. Here's my attempt at rearranging the obituary. Late Thursday night, 21 July 1955, Mrs. Mary Etta Pease died in her daughter’s home. The 88-year-old widow of George A. Pease took her last breath in Mrs. Edna Griffin’s home on 9 Griffin Avenue. Sons Fremont A. and Charles Pease and brother Charles Wyman also mourned the passing of the Seventh-day Adventist Church in Auburn member. At the time of her death, Fremont lived in Monmouth. Meanwhile, Charles is also in Monmouth. Only one brother outlived Edna, Charles Wyman of Dryden and Weld. Reverend Chester Staples conducted the funeral services on Sunday, 24 July, at 2 o'clock at the Russell's Funeral Home. Mary Etta’s final resting place is the Norcross Hill Cemetery, Chesterville. Even my favorite grammar checker - Grammarly - is complaining about the story's syntax above. That's okay. The goal of a rough draft is to finish it - not make it flawless. So we're off to a good start. However, if you find it difficult to finish this step, then try using StoryAssist by Storied. Notice, that after adding a few brief details, StoryAssist™ by Storied writes a few paragraphs with context and emotion. However, there are some pitfalls when using such tools. For instance, do we know that it was a somber summer day? Do we know that it was a tragedy? You can try to use ChatGPT to write a family history. You'll have more success if you feed the prompt with details from an obituary and tell the tool to write a brief story. No matter how you start, turn the facts from the obituary into a narrative, and then it's time to improve the story. Improve the Obituary Story Start The next four steps covered in the challenge include: Mark Up the Story Start Add Familial Context Map Things Out Add Historical Context Mary Etta Pease's obituary triggered numerous places to ask further contextual questions that led to the addition of familial context and mapping of various locations. Watch the video linked above to understand a sampling of the suggestions I gave to June. ↪️ Do you want to write a family history book? Grab your copy of this FREE Writing Guide: Rough Draft After Two Hours After two hours, I have the following draft with numerous questions for June to resolve. Late Thursday night, 21 July 1955, Mrs. Mary Etta Pease died in her daughter’s home about 50 southeast miles from her birthplace and four months shy of her 89th birthday. The 38-year-old widow of George A. Pease took her last breath in the home of Walter and Edna Griffin on 9 Griffin Avenue, Rockland, Maine. The steep-roofed two-story home sits on a corner lot with a porch with railings. Lattice covers the space below the porch and sets off the flower garden. As a married couple, George and Mary had lived in Livermore, where he worked as a day laborer, 20 miles west of her birthplace. By 1910, they had moved 25 miles east to Oakland, where he became a cobbler who owned his own shop. A cobbler shop in Oakland was possibly a smart investment as the C. F. Hathaway Company, which manufactured men's and boy’s shirts, was located in the neighboring town of Waterville, Maine. At the age of 59, George died after he and Mary Etta had shared 30 years of marriage. He joined the couple’s six children who had not survived childhood in death. They were Mabel Etta, Effie May, Netty May, George Winfield, Ralph, an unnamed baby girl, and Arthur. Meanwhile, at the age of 50, Mary Etta grieved along with her four surviving children, three of whom remained in the home. Daughter Elizabeth, 28, was the wife of Harry Lambert. The Lamberts likely lived in their own home as they had three children - Roy, aged 5, Charles, aged 2, and Irene, aged 1. This left Mary Etta to raise Edna Viola, 12, Freemont Allen, 10, and Charles L, 6. By 1920, she moved 25 miles southwest to Monmouth. Mary Etta lived in Monmouth until at least the 1940s. When Edna, Fremont, and Charles had grown, Mary Etta moved in with her daughter Edna. She did not have the option to live with her daughter Elizabeth Lambert, as she had died in 1944. In 1950, Edna, aged 53, and Walter, aged #, were empty nesters. Edna’s children from her first marriage and her sons with Walter seem to have moved out of the house upon reaching their majority. Therefore, Mary Etta moved 47 miles southeast to the coastal town of Rockland and remained with her daughter for at least five years. However, her two sons, Fremont, aged 52, and Charles, aged #, remained in Monmouth. Working as a trucker, Fremont and his wife Grace, were raising their children Helen (21), George A (20), Freemont Jr (19), and Mary A (10). Meanwhile, Charles was a relative newlywed, having married Mary in 1948. Fremont and Charles were neighbors in Monmouth. Mary Etta living with her daughter seemed more logical, even if her home was far from the town she’d lived in for the past two decades. Fremont had children left to raise, while Charles had recently married. Edna had grown children and space, so Mary Etta was likely not an imposition. Besides joining her husband and six children in death, Mary Etta was preceded in death by her mother, Melvina. Mary Etta did not know the identity of her biological father at the time of her death. She was raised by her stepfather, Thomas Wyman, and joined him and her half-siblings, George, Emma Mae, and Clara Wyman, in death as well. Her sole surviving sibling was a 67-year-old brother named Charles Wyman, who lived in Dryden and Weld. He outlived Mary Etta by five more years. Reverend Chester Staples, of the Seventh-day Adventist Church in Auburn, conducted the funeral services on Sunday, 24 July, at 2 o'clock at the Russell's Funeral Home. Auburn was located over 50 miles west of Rockland and 25 miles south of the cemetery. George and Mary Etta share a stone in the Norcross Hill Cemetery in Chesterville, Maine, along with six children. No other relatives seem to be buried in the cemetery. The cemetery is located about 60 miles northwest of where Mary Etta died and about 20 miles west of where she was born. It’s difficult to find as it has no address. To find it, drive 2.5 miles out from Chesterville Village to Ridge Road. At the Norcross Pond with the Public Boat Landing, a right turn leads up a road until racing the Norcross Hill Road on the left. Halfway up the hill, a cemetery with many unreadable, tipped, over, and broken stones is situated. (Citations not included in blog post. June has them and can add them to her story.) It is evident that the story lacks historical context due to the time limit of 2 hours that I had for research. However, I presented June with some resources during the video that she can use to enhance the story's depth. Furthermore, the current draft needs to be revised to follow a more engaging story structure. This can be done during the editing phase. Currently, June has enough material to incorporate the suggestions and questions I provided. If you have any further recommendations, please leave them in the comments, and we will ensure that June receives them. As June has submitted her story, she will receive access to the fully marked-up Google Docs file, which includes additional questions that I raised for her. Submit Your Writing Challenge Documents Do you want to receive a rough draft with all the suggestions and edits, like June did? Would you like to see if I can turn your genealogical document into a family story? Follow these submission steps: If you're not on the writing email list, then click this link to not only get the guide: 5 Simple Steps to Start Writing About Your Ancestors, but also receive the email address to submit your genealogical document. If you're already receiving emails about new video releases, then reply to any of those emails. When you have the email address do the following: Put "Writing Challenge" in the subject line. Send me an image file or a link to the document online. Include a transcription of the document. Include a link to a public profile of the ancestor featured in the document. (The profile can be on Ancestry, FamilySearch, MyHeritage, Findmypast, or WikiTree.) Once those four steps are complete, send your submission. I'll select entries based on the order of receipt and variety of sources. (FYI. Please don't send obituaries as I have plenty to choose from right now.) You will receive a link to the annotated Google Docs file once the video is published. Feel free to use my draft to complete your story without attribution, but gratitude is appreciated. Show Notes Improve Your Family History Writing Skills Unleash Your Family's Story with StoryAssist by Storied! QUICKLY Write Your Family History Using Google Docs Features Transformative Technique for Writing Family Histories! - Boxed Text How to Create a Genealogy Research Map with Google My Maps You Have Permission To Do This When Writing Genealogy | Carol Baxter How to Write a Better Family History Through Editing 5 Simple Steps to Start Writing About Your Ancestors A Recipe for Writing Family History Links to Social History Websites Seventh Day Adventist Theology - Wikipedia 21 July 1955 - Take Me Back To 21 July 1955 - On This Day by The History Channel July 1955 - Wikipedia

Have you ever wondered what family history is all about? It's a question that often arises among newcomers and seasoned enthusiasts alike. The concept of family history may seem daunting initially, but fear not! This article will break it down into bite-sized pieces and show you how easy and fulfilling it can be to delve into your ancestors' stories. Defining What is Family History Family history can be summed up in two words: family and stories. It's about discovering and preserving the tales and experiences of your relatives, creating a library of stories regarding your lineage. It's like unlocking a treasure chest of memories, connecting you to your roots, and providing a sense of belonging. The Power of Stories Picture your grandfather or great-grandmother, someone you may have never had the chance to meet or get to know well. Family history allows you to bridge that gap by collecting and sharing their stories. Take, for example, my grandpa Lew. Although I was two when he passed away, my family ensured I knew everything about him. I can't help but imagine the day I might meet him in the afterlife, eagerly discussing those tales passed down through the generations. This is one of our earliest videos quickly explaining - What is Family history? Small Stories = Large Family History So, what are these stories that make family history so captivating? Let's dive into a few fascinating chapters from my family. 1. The Old-Fashioned Milkman Grandpa Lew spent an impressive 22 years as a home delivery milkman for Bordens. Imagine the early mornings, the clinking of glass bottles, and the satisfaction of serving his community. It's the kind of detail that brings a person's character to life. 2. Buckyey Football Fanatic On Saturdays, when he had a delivery route, Grandpa Lew would tune into the Ohio State Buckeyes football team on his truck radio. A dedicated fan, he reveled in cheering on his favorite team from the comfort of his milk truck. When he didn't have a truck route and the Buckeyes played in Columbus, Grandpa Lew worked as an usher at Horseshoe Stadium. It's a charming image showcasing his love for the red and white team dominating Big Ten Football. 3. A Stolen Heart In the realm of romance, Grandpa Lew's story takes a captivating turn. He met my grandmother by capturing the heart of his buddy's girlfriend, affectionately known as "Chicken." Love at first sight, they say! This unexpected twist adds a touch of drama and intrigue to our family's history. 4. The Bowling Boy Did Grandpa Lew really achieve a perfect 300 bowling game? That remains a matter of debate among his daughters. Nevertheless, he won numerous prizes, including a shiny silver tea set. His bowling prowess, whether myth or reality, adds an air of excitement to his legacy. 5. Dancing with Daughters One of the most heartwarming aspects of Grandpa Lew's story is his love for dancing with his three beautiful daughters, one of whom is my mom. They would step on his toes, learning the art of social dance under his patient guidance. As someone who adores social dancing, I can't help but wish I could share that joyful experience with him. Embrace the Story-Focused Family History Challenge Now that you've glimpsed the wonders of family history, I challenge you to embark on your journey of discovery. Writing a memory, description, or a factual story about one of your relatives takes five minutes each day. Imagine, after 52 weeks, you'll have an impressive collection of 52 captivating stories that vividly depict your family's past. Stay Connected and Share Stay tuned for more helpful tips, strategies, and engaging projects to enrich your family history endeavors. Grab this Free Guide on how to start writing your family history, and you'll receive reminders about new storytelling tips and tricks. ↪️ Do you want to write a family history book? Grab your copy of this FREE Writing Guide: Or grab one of my other free guides focused on climbing your family tree, by clicking the Family History Fanatics Resource Guides. More Family History Writing Inspiration The Biggest Reason You Haven't Written Your Family History Book 3 Reasons to Stop Researching and Start Writing What's the point of writing a family history if nobody will read it? Stop Thinking Nobody Cares About Your Family History

Are you curious about the stories and secrets hidden within the branches of your family tree? Do you yearn to uncover the forces that shaped your ancestors' lives? Getting started on a genealogy research journey can give you a captivating window into your family's history. In today's digital age, abundant resources await, ready to assist you in tracing your roots. However, with so much information available, knowing where to start is essential. Let's dive into the world of genealogy research and learn how to begin your captivating journey of self-discovery. Starting with What You Have: A Treasure Trove of Genealogy Records Before diving into the vast realm of genealogy research, it's crucial to start with what you already know and have within your reach. Begin by collecting various types of genealogy records that might be found in your own home. These records act as stepping stones, guiding you back through the generations of your family's history. Let's explore some of these valuable resources: The Family Bible: The family Bible often serves as a treasure trove of vital information, documenting births, marriages, and even deaths. Take a moment to peruse its pages and uncover the rich tapestry of your family's past. Birth, Death, and Marriage Announcements and Certificates: These records hold valuable details about your ancestors' significant life events. Unearth these announcements and certificates from your family's archives, and let them reveal their secrets to you. Old Family Photographs: Don't overlook the importance of old family photographs. Delve into the memories captured within them, and don't forget to check the back for family notes. These photos can offer valuable hints and connections to your family's history. Yearbooks and Scrapbooks: These nostalgic relics often provide glimpses into your ancestors' lives, showcasing their education, interests, and social circles. Unearth these treasures and let them transport you back in time. Your Family's Oral History: Engage in heartfelt conversations with family members and listen to their tales. These oral histories hold immense value and can provide unique insights into your family's past. Every story, every memory matters. While exploring the records in your possession, don't hesitate to contact other family members. Engage them in conversations and ask if they possess any valuable information or documents. Pay particular attention to the birth, marriage, and death dates of family members, as these details form the backbone of your family tree. Building Your Family Tree: An Online Adventure Armed with the knowledge gleaned from your family records, it's time to embark on the exciting task of building your family tree. Begin by adding your own name, birth date, and other essential information to an online tree. Several platforms offer free tools to get you started, such as FamilySearch, Ancestry, and MyHeritage. Here are a few tips to guide you on this virtual adventure: Start with Yourself: Always begin by documenting your own details, and then gradually work backward through the generations. This approach ensures accuracy and clarity as you unravel the threads of your family's history. Include All Family Relationships: Remember, genealogy research encompasses every branch, every connection. Capture the relationships of your parents, grandparents, siblings, aunts, uncles, and beyond. Even half-relationships and step-relations play a significant role. After all, everyone has a place in your family tree. Adoption and Non-Biological Relationships: If you're adopted or lack information about your biological parents or grandparents, include what you know about the people you consider family. Your family tree is a testament to the bonds that transcend bloodlines. By diligently adding names, birth dates, and other important information to your online tree, you'll create a foundation from which your family's story can unfold. Harnessing the Power of Genealogical Databases: Clues from the Past As your family tree takes shape within genealogical databases like FamilySearch or Ancestry, these platforms become invaluable allies in your research journey. As you add individuals to your tree, the databases generate clues to potential records that unlock a wealth of information about your ancestors' lives and relationships. For beginners in genealogy research, it's recommended to explore vital and census records first. These collections provide an accessible starting point, allowing new researchers to become familiar with the content and layout of these documents. Moreover, they offer valuable connections to relatives. Here's what you can expect to find within these records: Individuals in the Household: In early census records from 1790 to 1840, only the head of households is listed. However, this still provides crucial information about your ancestors' living arrangements. Location: Discover the state, county, district, or town where your ancestor lived. This knowledge is a gateway to further exploration and narrows your search. Age: Depending on the census, age categories or specific ages are listed. With a little mathematical deduction, you can estimate your ancestor's birth date. Marriage Status: Uncover whether your ancestor was married, single, widowed, or divorced. This information sheds light on their life journey. Gender, Race/Ethnicity, and Occupation: Gain insights into your ancestor's identity, heritage, and livelihood through these records. Date and Place of Birth, Marriage, and Death: These crucial milestones help piece together your family's narrative. Names of Parents and Their Place of Birth: Discovering your ancestors' parents and their birthplaces allows you to trace your lineage back further. As you navigate the vast array of genealogical records, don't hesitate to seek assistance. Volunteers at FamilySearch Centers and local genealogy societies are eager to support and guide you in your research endeavors. Remember, help is available if you know where to look. Getting Started in Genealogy: A Journey of Discovery Genealogy research is a journey that unfolds with each new piece of information uncovered. Be prepared to embark on a quest that requires persistence, curiosity, and a willingness to dig deep. At times, you may encounter dead ends but don't be discouraged. Sometimes, the most valuable clues are found in unexpected places—a forgotten cemetery or a cherished family heirloom. By starting with what you know, utilizing the resources at hand, and embracing the assistance of fellow enthusiasts, you can unravel the mysteries of your family's past. With every branch you add to your family tree, you weave a richer tapestry of your ancestors' lives. This tapestry reveals the interplay of history, love, and resilience. Grab Your Free Genealogy Research Guide and Begin Your Journey Today! Embarking on the enchanting path of genealogy research is a venture filled with excitement and discovery. Don't forget to grab your free genealogy research guide to enhance your journey and equip you with valuable tips and tricks. ↪️ Are you new to genealogy? Grab your copy of this FREE Beginner Guide: Unlock the doors to the past and embark on an adventure that will leave you connected, inspired, and forever enriched. 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Regarding genealogy research, there are often myths and misconceptions surrounding archives. These preconceived notions can limit our understanding of the valuable resources available. This article will debunk popular myths about archives, shedding light on the captivating world of non-documentary materials. Get ready to challenge these misconceptions and discover the hidden treasures that await within archives for genealogy research. Myth #1: Archives are nothing but dusty boxes of old documents. Debunking Myth #1: Archives hold a wealth of diverse materials beyond documents. While the image of dusty boxes filled with old documents may come to mind, archives are far from being mere repositories of paper. In reality, they are treasure troves of historical artifacts, personal objects, audio/video recordings, and more. These materials provide a multi-dimensional understanding of the past, allowing us to connect with our ancestors in unique ways. By venturing beyond traditional documents, we unlock a world of tangible links to history. Myth #2: Archives have limited relevance to personal connections and understanding. Debunking Myth #2: Archives offer personal objects and insights into the lives of historical figures. Contrary to popular belief, archives offer personal objects related to historical events and notable individuals. They hold artifacts that were once a part of someone's life, such as cherished belongings, tools, or even clothing. These objects provide an intimate glimpse into our ancestors' daily lives, personalities, and cultural contexts. By exploring these personal artifacts, we gain a deeper understanding of their experiences and foster a stronger connection to our familial heritage. Myth #3: Archives are devoid of audio and visual resources. Debunking Myth #3: Archives house audio/video recordings that bring history to life. While written records are crucial, they only capture a fraction of the past. Archives often house audio and video recordings, including interviews with historical figures, speeches, music performances, and other significant events. These recordings offer a unique perspective, enabling us to hear the voices and witness the moments of the past. By immersing ourselves in these auditory and visual resources, we gain a richer understanding of history, enhancing our genealogical research and personal connection to our ancestors. ↪️ Are you struggling to break through your brick walls? Grab your copy of this FREE Brick Wall Busting Guide: Myth #4: Artifacts have little relevance to genealogy research. Debunking Myth #4: Artifacts provide invaluable insights into the material culture of the past. Artifacts may seem disconnected from the pursuit of genealogy research. Still, they offer profound insights into the material culture of bygone eras. From clothing and jewelry to tools and weapons, artifacts represent the physical remnants of a specific time and place. By studying these tangible objects, we better understand our ancestors' daily lives, traditions, and cultural contexts. Artifacts add layers of authenticity and richness to our genealogical narratives, painting a more comprehensive picture of our heritage. Embrace the True Potential of Archives As we debunk these myths surrounding archives in genealogy research, we invite you to embrace their true potential. Archives are not limited to dusty documents but encompass various non-documentary materials that bring history to life. Exploring personal objects, audio/video recordings, and artifacts deepen our connection to the past and uncover fascinating details about our ancestors. So, let go of these misconceptions, step into the world of archives, and unlock the hidden treasures that await you on your genealogical journey. ↪️ Do you want to dive even deeper into genetic genealogy, writing family histories, and climbing your family tree? Join the FHF Xtra Premium Membership and get a wealth of exclusive content. Additional Insights Into Archives for Genealogy Research 5 Tips For Maximizing Use of the Internet Archives 3 Reasons All Genealogists Should Use ArchiveGrid Using Manuscript Collections For Genealogy Research | Featuring The Archive Lady

Genealogy research can present challenges, especially when vital records housed in courthouses have been destroyed due to fire or other unfortunate circumstances. Many researchers feel disheartened and give up on their quest to uncover their ancestors' stories. However, there's no need to despair! In this article, we'll explore alternative sources and methods to help you find the information you need to trace your family history, even in burned counties. Exploring Alternative Record Sources When faced with the loss of vital records, it's crucial to turn to alternative sources. Consider the following options to gather valuable information about your ancestors: Religious Records: Religious records can offer a treasure trove of genealogical information. They often contain details about births, baptisms, marriages, and deaths. Consulting these records can provide significant insights into your family history. Probate Records: Explore probate records, which deal with the distribution of a person's estate after their death. These records can shed light on familial connections, inheritance patterns, and valuable dates. Military Records: Military records hold valuable data about your ancestors' service in the armed forces. They can provide insights into their ranks, units, battles they participated in, and even physical descriptions. The Power of Census Records Census records are an invaluable resource for genealogists, even without courthouse records. These records, available through various genealogy websites, can uncover a wealth of information about your ancestors, including: Age and birthplace Occupation and employment history Residence and migration patterns Family members and their relationships ↪️ Are you looking for more genealogy resources? Grab your copy of FREE Genealogy Research Guide: Unlocking Manuscripts in Archives Don't overlook the potential of manuscripts stored in archives. Diaries, letters, and old family bibles may not be official documents. Still, they can contain personal stories, details, and anecdotes about your ancestors. These manuscripts offer unique glimpses into their lives, enriching your family history research. Delayed or Reconstructed Records When vital record collections are damaged, county officials often attempt to recreate the records. This is particularly important for land records and court cases, which carry significant societal and financial implications. When reaching out to a burned county, inquire about the existence of any delayed or reconstructed record collections. These reconstructed records can fill crucial gaps in your genealogical research. ↪️ Are you struggling to break through your brick walls? Grab your copy of this FREE Brick Wall Busting Guide: Patience When Doing Burned County Genealogy Research Above all, patience and persistence are key in genealogy research. Some records turn up in unexpected places, defying the odds. For instance, there have been cases where construction workers found vaults of county court records during remodeling efforts. These incredible discoveries offer renewed hope and the possibility of unearthing hidden histories. While the loss of vital records due to courthouse fires or other disasters can be disheartening, it doesn't have to be the end of your genealogy journey. By exploring alternative sources such as church records, probate records, military records, census records, manuscripts in archives, and reconstructed records, you can continue tracing your family history. Remember, patience and persistence are vital attributes in uncovering your ancestors' stories. Embrace the unexpected and maintain a positive outlook as you navigate the exciting world of genealogy research. QUESTION OF THE DAY: Now, let's discuss: Which locations do you find it difficult to research? Additional Genealogy Research Strategies A reference for all blog posts and videos mentioned in the YouTube episode. 5 Tips For Maximizing Use of the Internet Archives 10 Little-Known Genealogy Websites Professional Genealogists Use Easy Tips for Researching in Genealogy Databases Everyone Should Know How to Methodically Research Common Name Ancestors Researching Same Named Individuals to Solve Genealogy Brick Walls How to Go About Finding Your Illegitimate Ancestor's Father

Are you tempted to portray your ancestors as glamorous, heroic, or flawless when sharing your family history? Do you shy away from stories that reveal their vulnerabilities, struggles, or flaws? In this insightful interview, we explore the common mistake of only telling happy stories and the importance of authenticity in writing family history. In a fascinating conversation with Laura Hedgecock, author of "Memories of Me: A Complete Guide to Telling and Sharing the Stories of Your Life," we delve into the value of embracing the full spectrum of human experiences in our narratives. The Pitfall of Only Telling Happy Stories Laura cautions against presenting sugar-coated stories that lack authenticity. She explains that such stories that fall into the "sugar won't melt in my mouth" category. Often used in the South, this expression symbolizes the artificial sweetness that pervades narratives focused solely on positive aspects. By contrast, the opposite of happy stories isn't necessarily sad stories; it is the real stories. Real stories reflect the truth of our ancestors' lives, showcasing their humanity in all its complexity. The Importance of Authenticity in Writing Family History Authenticity is critical in crafting engaging family history narratives. By sharing joys, sorrows, triumphs, and struggles, we create connections that resonate with readers. When we omit the storms that preceded the happy moments, the perfection portrayed fails to evoke an emotional response. In the article, Laura shares her personal journey and her grandmother's writing as examples. She highlights the importance of sharing authentic stories, even when they are difficult or uncomfortable. Something her grandmother neglected to do. ↪️ Do you want to write a family history book? Grab your copy of this FREE Writing Guide: Creating Connections Through Authentic Narratives Laura suggests that the best family historians offer readers a slice of life. Such stories allow readers to imagine knowing someone they never had the chance to meet or getting to know them in a new light. By weaving together different facets of an ancestor's life, we gain a deeper understanding of who they were as individuals. Start Writing and Sharing Your Story Laura advises starting by writing these stories for yourself, giving yourself the freedom to express raw emotions and memories. Once you have the initial draft, you can assess your motives and decide if and how to share them with others. Timing and the right audience are crucial considerations when sharing less-than-happy stories. Writing partners or critique groups can offer valuable feedback and provide a safe space for exploring these narratives. Additionally, reaching out to a broader community, whether through blogging or memoir classes, can be empowering. Sharing your story with strangers who can offer support and understanding can help you navigate the process and release any shame or burden associated with difficult experiences. Capturing Real Lives, Avoids Family History Writing Mistakes Ultimately, writing family history is about more than just preserving names and dates. It is about capturing the essence of our ancestors' lives and creating connections with future generations. By embracing the full range of human experiences and sharing the highs and the lows, we create a rich history that profoundly resonates with readers. Start Writing an Authentic Family History Today Writing a family history is a journey that requires honesty, vulnerability, and authenticity. Avoid the trap of only telling happy stories and instead embrace the power of sharing authentic, unfiltered narratives. By doing so, you breathe life into your ancestors' stories and provide future generations with a profound understanding of their roots. Listen to the Full Interview with Laura Hedgecock Watch the video Don't Only Tell Happy Family Stories - AVOID This Writing Mistake on the Write Your Family History Channel to gain further insights from Laura Hedgecock on the importance of authenticity in writing family history. Discover how embracing the full spectrum of human experiences can enhance your storytelling and create connections that will resonate with your readers. Start crafting your family history narrative today and inspire others to do the same. Continue Learning How to Write Family Histories Why Should You Add Historical Context To Your Writing? 3 Steps For Using Social History Make a Family History Better Family Historians Should Avoid Presentism "I Don't Have BLACK SHEEP in My Family Tree" - Stop Believing This Myth The Truth About Family History Writing Prompts How to Add Action to a Family Story

Exploring the rich history of our ancestors' lives and experiences offers an enlightening and empowering glimpse into the past. While we may not be connected to famous figures or renowned lineage, our family history holds invaluable stories waiting to be unveiled. From professors to breadmen and even the occasional drunk, our ancestors' diverse experiences contribute to a comprehensive understanding of the past. While writing family history, you'll understand the meaning of love, sacrifice, and the urgency to combat the flawed interpretations of the modern world. The Significance of Diverse Experiences: Amidst the mosaic of our family tree lie numerous strong men and women who embody the essence of love and sacrifice. Their stories, intertwined with those of ordinary individuals, form the bedrock of our collective history. By documenting and preserving these tales, we capture a more accurate and holistic picture of the past. Each narrative represents a thread weaving the fabric of our heritage, enabling future generations to understand their roots and forge a stronger sense of identity. The Perils of Presentism: Presentism, the tendency to view the past through the lens of the present, poses a grave threat to our perception of history. Many individuals mistakenly believe that their own experiences bear no resemblance to those of bygone eras. This toxic mindset hinders our ability to comprehend the struggles and triumphs of our predecessors, ultimately making the present insufferable. By recognizing the fallacy of presentism, we can break free from its grip and embrace a more nuanced understanding of the past. As genealogists, we must do our part to remove presentism from our projects and write what was, not what we wish it was. Write Your Family History with Honesty and Fairness: As you write your family history, it is crucial to be honest yet fair. Acknowledging our ancestors' triumphs and flaws allows for a balanced narrative that reflects the complexities of human existence. By painting a comprehensive portrait, we ensure that future generations inherit a truthful account that resonates authentically. Embracing the imperfections and virtues of our family's journey is a testament to the resilience and strength of the human spirit. Share Your History With Libraries and Archives: Once the tale of your family's history is complete, sharing your work with libraries and archives is essential. Donate your family stories to before it's too late, These repositories of knowledge serve as invaluable resources for researchers, historians, and individuals seeking to connect with their own heritage. By contributing your family history, you actively participate in the preservation of collective memory and ensure that future generations can access and appreciate the stories that shaped their lineage. ↪️ Do you want to write a family history book? Grab your copy of this FREE Writing Guide: Your Family History Matters: Writing your family history is not merely an act of personal reflection; it is a powerful way to preserve and honor the legacy of those who came before us. Each story adds a new layer of richness and depth to the tapestry of history, enabling us to confront the misconceptions of the modern world. Your family's experiences matter, and by starting to write today, you embrace your role as a custodian of the past, paving the way for a future rooted in understanding, wisdom, and resilience. What Part Will You Play in the Fight Against Negative Modernity? In a world where modernity threatens to overshadow the significance of our ancestors' lives, writing family history emerges as a potent weapon. By capturing the stories of diverse experiences and embodying love and sacrifice, we push back against the flawed interpretations of the past. Let us embark on this journey together, cherishing the memories, preserving the truth, and creating a bridge between generations. Begin documenting your family's legacy today. More Family History Writing Inspiration 3 Reasons Your Family History Benefits Society Family Historians Should Avoid Presentism "I Don't Have BLACK SHEEP in My Family Tree" - Stop Believing This Myth Don't SHAME Your Immigrant Ancestors for This, Instead WRITE Their Story Don’t Use a Family Crest, Until You Read This Avoid This Family History Writing Mistake, Creating Authentic Stories

Writing family history stories is a wonderful way to preserve and share your heritage. However, when editing those stories, it's common to feel overwhelmed or unsure of where to begin. In a recent conversation with Brenda Hudson from VoicedLife, a specialist in helping families capture their stories, we explored a gentler approach to editing family narratives. In this article, we'll delve into the technique known as reflection and discuss the importance of content development in refining your writing. Get ready to discover a more encouraging way to perfect your family history stories. The Technique of Reflection: A Gentle Revision Approach Brenda introduces the concept of reflection as a more gentle and curious way of revising your family stories. Rather than approaching the editing process with a red pen and a critical eye, reflection encourages you to be inquisitive about your writing. It allows you to step back from your writing and review it from a reader's perspective, appreciating the magic that comes from a stream-of-consciousness approach. By reflecting on your prose, you can gain valuable insights into your work. Highlighting and Noting: Uncovering the Gems in Your Writing As part of the reflection process, Brenda suggests highlighting or underlining words or phrases that jump out at you while skimming your written piece. These may be elements that resonate with you, evoke emotion, or stand out for unknown reasons. The goal is not to focus on fixing anything at this stage but rather to identify what is exciting or captivating in your writing. Additionally, she encourages jotting down any questions or thoughts that arise while reading your work in the margins. These observations and questions serve as valuable cues for further exploration and development. Summarizing and Noticing Themes: Processing Your Writing After skimming and reflecting on your piece, Brenda recommends summarizing your observations. Write a couple of sentences or bullet points noting any themes you notice, questions that arise, or aspects that surprise you. This summarization process allows you to gain a deeper understanding of what you have written and helps pave the way for further revision and expansion. It can also unveil hidden connections and inspire new story ideas you may want to explore. ↪️ Do you want to write a family history book? Grab your copy of this FREE Writing Guide: Content Development: Expanding Your Story's Impact Content development plays a crucial role in refining your family history stories. Brenda suggests seeking feedback from trusted individuals, such as writing groups or supportive peers, who can help you identify areas where clarity and expansion are needed. By sharing your writing, you invite others to ask questions, offer suggestions, and seek more in-depth explanations. This collaborative approach allows you to enhance your stories and provide additional context for readers who may not be familiar with certain aspects of your family history. It's an opportunity to expand the narrative and make it more engaging and relatable. The Grammar Stage: A Later Step in the Editing Process While grammar and syntax are important elements of editing, Brenda emphasizes that they should not be the primary focus in the early stages. Adopting a gentler approach to editing allows your stories to breathe and evolve naturally before diving into the technical details. Once you have refined the content and ensured the story's clarity, you can move on to addressing grammar and syntax issues. The final step in perfecting family histories. This sequential process allows you to maintain the flow and authenticity of your writing. Try These Tips When Perfecting Family Histories Editing family history stories doesn't have to be a daunting task. By embracing the reflection technique and focusing on content development, you can create a more gentle and encouraging editing experience. With these tips and a supportive mindset, you'll be well-equipped to perfect your family history stories and inspire others to do the same. More Tips on Perfecting Family Histories Paragraph Mistakes to Avoid While Writing Family Histories Quickly Transform Your Family History With Boxed Text Stop Repeating Your Ancestor's Names in Family Histories Stop Overusing Pronouns In Your Family History

Are you a passionate family history enthusiast like me? Then you will adore this simple yet powerful feature in FamilySearch Family Tree: tagging sources to specific information. Even though I spend a lot of time on FamilySearch, I recently discovered a new feature while helping someone at the local FamilySearch Center. This experience reminded me that it's impossible to catch everything released. What is Tagging Sources? If you’ve watched this channel for a while, you may know that I use genealogy software to attach sources to specific events that those records document. For instance, if a marriage record provides: A name A set of parents A residence on a specific date A marriage date Date of divorce from the previous spouse Then I will link that one marriage record to each of those facts. Previously, we could ‘tag records' within FamilySearch when we linked a source to the family tree. But we could only save the record to the parents’ profiles and tag the birth fact, death fact, sex, or name of an individual. If you went to the Source Tab on an Ancestor’s Profile, you could tag a source to Christening and Burial. If you had a source documenting a residence, military service date, divorce date, or land transaction, you couldn’t connect the fact and the source on the FamilySearch platform. Now, that has changed, and I couldn’t be happier. To watch a demonstration of tagging, step by step, watch this video. Accessing Source Tagging on FamilySearch When it comes to tagging sources in Family Tree, you have two convenient options: the Sources section and the Details section. Let's explore both methods step by step. Tagging Sources from the Sources Section Sign in to your FamilySearch.org account and navigate to a relative’s Person Page. Click on the "Sources" tab to review any previously linked references. Click on the Title or the drop-down arrow on the right of a source. The source widget will expand so you can review all the details about a specific source. Notice the boldface word “Tags” and whether the source is tagged with any details about your ancestor. See the "+ Add Tag" button? Give it a friendly click to reveal a list of available tags. Go through the list and choose the ones that apply to your source. Don't see the tag you need? No problem! Click "+ Add Tag" under "Other Information Tags" to create a custom tag. So far, I’ve noticed three tag choices: Alternate names Residences Custom Event I wonder if we’ll be able to tag facts in the future. (Such as clan, royalty, etc.). Select one of the above options, for example, Residence. FamilySearch will display a list of residences you’ve added to your ancestor profile in the Details tab. If you don’t see the residence event you want to tag, close out of this and navigate to the Details tab. Add a custom event, and tag the source from that view. (More on that in a moment). If you see the residence you want, click on that, and FamilySearch will tag that residence with the selected source. Click Save and move on to the next source to tag. Removing Tags with Ease What happens if you tag the wrong detail? No worries, you can remove the tag. If you’re still in the “Add Tag” Screen for a source, click on the highlighted tag to remove it. If you’re in the Source view and have expanded the details for a source, Click on the incorrect tag. In the Tag Pop-up screen, click “Delete Tag.” ↪️ Are you looking for more genealogy resources? Grab your copy of FREE Genealogy Research Guide: Tagging Sources from the Details Section What if the event doesn’t exist for tagging, or you are just working on an Ancestor’s Profile? What can you do then? Well, you can tag sources from the Details Section of a Profile. Click the "Details" on a relative’s profile. Scroll to the Other Information Section: Click the pencil icon beside an event. The event details window pops up. On the right panel of the pop-up menu, you'll find a list of sources if they were already tagged to this event. If you want to add more sources, or none are currently attached, Click "Tag Sources.” A list appears, showcasing all the sources linked to the person. Check the box next to each source you want to tag If needed, uncheck it to remove a tag. Click ‘’Save.” Close the event window and celebrate! ↪️ Do you want to dive even deeper into genetic genealogy, writing family histories, and climbing your family tree? Join the FHF Xtra Premium Membership and get a wealth of exclusive content. Why is FamilySearch Tagging Important? Tagging sources on the FamilySearch Family Tree website offers many benefits for anyone engaged in family history research. Here are a few reasons why this feature is incredibly beneficial: Enhanced Accuracy and Documentation: By tagging sources to specific information, you provide solid evidence and documentation for each detail in your family tree. It adds credibility to your research and helps others understand the basis for the information you've included. Improved Collaboration: Tagging sources allows you to share and collaborate with other researchers. When sources are linked to specific details, it becomes easier for others to assess the validity of the information and contribute their own insights, leading to a more collaborative and accurate representation of family history. Efficient Organization and Navigation: Tagging sources enables efficient organization of your research. You can easily locate and access the sources associated with a particular individual or specific detail, making reviewing and verifying your information simple. It streamlines the research process and helps you stay organized as your family tree grows. Traceable Research Path: By tagging sources, you create a traceable path for your research journey. Others can follow the sources you've used, evaluate their relevance, and potentially discover additional sources that complement your findings. This promotes a transparent and reproducible research process. Happy Tagging! With these simple steps, you'll have the power to tag sources in FamilySearch Family Tree effortlessly. Whether you tag them individually from the Sources section or in bulk from the Details section, your family history research will shine brighter with accurate and well-documented sources, creating a robust and trustworthy family tree. More Training on FamilySearch Family Tree Easily Merge Duplicates on the FamilySearch Family Tree How to Fix a Bad Merge in the Family Tree on FamilySearch Why is FamilySearch Making Changes To Your Family Tree? 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If genealogists could take a page from the boy band One Direction's hit song "What Makes You Beautiful," perhaps we'd write better family stories. Imagine capturing the essence of your ancestors and their extraordinary lives. At times, we tend to focus solely on capturing happy memories when recounting family stories. However, in a thought-provoking blog post by Laura Hedgecock from Treasure Chest of Memories, she highlights the mistake of writing exclusively about joyous moments. To delve deeper into this subject, check out the post: AVOID This Writing Mistake - Telling Only Happy Family Stories. However, Laura Hedgecock's use of the MyHeritage AI TimeMachine sparked an empathy that changed how she thought about beauty as it relates to herself and her ancestors. Reveal Your Inner Beauty with MyHeritage Time Machine Imagine if you could witness the untold stories that lie within your family's history. "If only you saw what I could see, you'll understand why I love you so desperately," as the lyrics go. These words resonate with the profound experience of reading about your ancestors and discovering their remarkable lives. In early 2023, MyHeritage released the AI Time Machine tool that takes 10 photos of you and transports your pictures into various historical settings and ethnic groups. One such transformed photo illustrates Laura as a Viking woman. This changed her perception of beauty and the stories she wanted to write about her family history. A Glimpse into the Past As Laura reflected on the Viking image generated by the AI tool, she realized that appearances convey little about our true essence. Photographs are relatively recent, but storytelling has been a timeless tradition. Laura's experience highlights the importance of embracing the diversity and richness of our ancestral heritage. These insights helped her transcend her own self-criticism. She encourages us to do the same mind shift - with or without the MyHeritage tool. Challenging Preconceived Notions: Laura's revelations extend to cherished memories of her mother and grandmother. Their remarks about photos that weren't "flattering" challenge the prevailing beauty standards. Back then, images didn't undergo extensive retouching and filters like today. Despite their concerns, Laura recognized the inherent beauty and loved the photos. This realization underscores the significance of appreciating our own worth and how others perceive us. ↪️ Do you want to write a family history book? Grab your copy of this FREE Writing Guide: Seeing with Fresh Eyes: Laura's journey of self-discovery urges us to step outside ourselves and recognize our value in the eyes of others. We often underestimate our own worth, but those who know us see us differently. Laura's encounter with an old friend, John, during the Murdoch trial in South Carolina, provided further insight. Despite his aging appearance, Laura observed moments where she saw him as the young man she once knew. This recognition taught her to appreciate the comfort and familiarity of seeing someone from the past. Embrace Your Unique Story: Writing your family history is a transformative endeavor that unveils the beauty and richness of your ancestral past. The MyHeritage AI TimeMachine empowers you to explore and appreciate the extraordinary lives that came before you. Embrace the diversity and uniqueness of your story, as inspired by Laura Hedgecock's journey. To experiment with the mind-shifting tool known as the MyHeritage AI TimeMachine, check out this tutorial. More Family History Writing Inspiration Stop Being Afraid of Writing Your Life Story Unlock Your Memories BEFORE Writing a Personal History 3 Memory Trigger Exercises for Your Next Interview Storied StoryAssist: Writing Family History and Life Stories Made Easy Ancestry StoryMaker Studio: Unleash Your Storytelling Potential We're All Storytellers: Writing Family History Joyfully

If you’re not using a modern database program, you’re missing out on a powerful tool to understand your ancestors better. Building a timeline for each ancestor is crucial because you can collate your information, see gaps in your research, and observe how historical events may have impacted your ancestor’s life. Embrace the Power of Timelines in Genealogy Research While numerous tools help you create genealogy timelines, I prefer using the built-in features in genealogy software, such as Family Tree Maker or RootsMagic. These software programs provide unique features that make the process of creating timelines a breeze. Let's explore the advantages and benefits of using timelines in genealogy research. Organized Information Collation Timelines visually represent your ancestor's life events, allowing you to organize and collate information efficiently. By recording births, marriages, deaths, residence information, military service, migration, and more, you create a comprehensive timeline that serves as a roadmap to your ancestors' lives. This organized approach helps you spot missing details and identify areas for further research. Watch this video. Revealing Relationships and Connections While individual timelines provide valuable insights, the real magic happens when you add the life events of family members to the list. You can easily include relatives' events on an ancestor's timeline using genealogy software like RootsMagic or Family Tree Maker. This feature allows you to visualize relationships, compare ages, and understand family dynamics more effectively. It's a captivating way to uncover hidden clues and see the bigger picture of your family's history. Discovering New Clues Once you turn on the events from relatives, you can begin to see clues you had not considered before. Timelines help you identify patterns, spot gaps in your research, and highlight significant historical events that may have influenced your ancestors' lives. With this broader perspective, you gain a deeper understanding of their stories, leading you to new avenues of investigation and discoveries. Answering Key Questions To find genealogy clues, you need to know what questions you're trying to answer. Timelines provide a structured framework to focus your research efforts. By narrowing your queries and concentrating on specific time periods, you can unravel mysteries and fill in missing pieces of the puzzle. Timelines empower you to ask the right questions, ultimately leading to more accurate and comprehensive family narratives. ↪️ Are you looking for more genealogy resources? Grab your copy of FREE Genealogy Research Guide: Unveiling the Story: A Timeline Case Study Let's explore how timelines can shed light on an ancestor's life using the example of Evaline Townley. By examining her timeline, we can uncover intriguing details and better understand her journey. Meet Evaline Evaline Townley, born on October 22, 1859, got married at 32 to William Talbot Peak on July 1, 1892. By reviewing her timeline, we notice that Evaline appeared in every census from her birth until her marriage, except for the fragmented 1890 census. Further investigation reveals that her mother, Anna Townley, passed away on June 24, 1881. This event marks a significant turning point in Evaline's life. Delving deeper, we discover that after her mother's death, Evaline took on domestic duties, caring for her three-year-old brother, Harry, as her father and brothers focused on their brick masonry business. This responsibility likely delayed her marriage until she could start her own family. The timeline allowed us to piece together this captivating story, highlighting the interconnected lives of Evaline and her relatives. Without the timelines in RootsMagic or Family Tree Maker, these connections and insights would have remained hidden. ↪️ Are you new to genealogy? Grab your copy of this FREE Beginner Guide: Timelines Reveal Clues to Evaline's Story All of this information was pulled together because I reviewed Evaline’s timeline within a genealogy database. The database quickly let me view her life events with key events of her father's and brothers' lives. It’s safe to say that someone needed to care for Harry. One could speculate that the burden would fall upon Evaline. Further support for this speculation is that Evaline would name one of her children after her younger brother, presumably the one she helped raise. Additionally, other family resources indicate her great fondness for her brother Harry. Looking at the timelines that included family life events helped me discover why a strong connection must exist. I could not have easily made this connection without the help of the timelines in RootsMagic or Family Tree Maker. ↪️ Do you want to dive even deeper into genetic genealogy, writing family histories, and climbing your family tree? Join the FHF Xtra Premium Membership and get a wealth of exclusive content. What Happens If You Make A Wrong Assumption? However, remember I said to thoroughly research the lives of all of Evaline's relatives - namely her father and brothers? Well, a new addition to the timeline is turning my assumptions on its head. Apparently, her father, Richard, married Catherine Lane. And now, I have to rethink my theory. Is it wrong to make false assumptions? Not necessarily. We use the research we have available when we make our conclusions. And we always leave ourselves open to the possibility that something can change. And that's the beauty of the timelines and researching and writing as you go. Both have been discussed a lot here on Family History Fanatics and on my new channel. So if you discover new evidence that turns your assumption on its head, that's okay. It's time to research the new edition and perhaps Evaline's extended family - namely her aunts, uncles, cousins, and that FAN Club (we talked about earlier this year on this channel) to see whether the 22-year-old lived in the home with maybe her stepmother or someone else. And if that's the case, Evaline's story changes. If you enjoy transforming documents into engaging narratives, don't miss my new channel, Write Your Family History. Click the above to visit the channel and subscribe. Embrace the Journey of Research and Writing As genealogists, our assumptions and conclusions are based on the research available at a given time. Timelines provide a dynamic framework that evolves with new evidence, allowing us to adapt our narratives and theories as we uncover fresh information. Embrace the beauty of timelines and the iterative process of researching and writing. Remember to fully explore the lives of all your ancestors' relatives to paint a complete picture. By investigating extended family members, aunts, uncles, and cousins, as well as adding the FAN Club (Friends, Associates, and Neighbors), you may stumble upon unexpected details that reshape your understanding of your ancestors' lives. So, if you're ready to unlock the fascinating stories hidden within your family history, utilize the power of timelines and watch as your genealogy research takes on new dimensions of depth and richness. Uncover More Genealogy Research Clues Are You Mapping Out Your Research Problems? Using Spreadsheets for Genealogy Research How Database Timelines Helped Me Learn More About My Ancestor Get MORE CLUES From Genealogy Records (Video)

Most genealogists who embark on the journey of writing family histories want to write non-boring family histories. One quick fix to many story-based histories is eliminating passive voice throughout your text. While this sounds simple, it's actually a bit of a challenge. But thankfully, several tools can spot weak writing and help us make small changes to our manuscripts. Why is Passive Voice So Bad? Using passive verbs is a skill taught in my children's grammar program. If passive tense is grammatically correct, why should writers avoid using it? Andrew Pudewa, author of Teaching Writing: Structure and Style, declares that “the verb can make or break a sentence.” He suggests banning weak verbs such as get, got, go, went, see, saw, say, and said. They are grammatically accurate but very weak very. For instance, instead of saying: John went to church every Sunday. You'd replace the boring word 'went' with one of the following: John attended church every Sunday. John bounced to church every Sunday. John trudged to church every Sunday. To better understand boing verbs and how to replace them, pick up a copy of the Student Resource Notebook by the Institute for Excellence in Writing. Now, as you improve the quality of your verbs, you can still run a foul by how you structure your sentences. Compare the following sentence. John and Sarah were married by Reverend Howe. Reverend Howe married John and Sarah. In the first option, the sentence's subject does not do the action. The reverend marries the couple, but the couple is the subject of the sentence. In the second option, notice that you'd use fewer words with a clearer meaning because the Reverence does the action. While passive tense is correct in many instances, the more you can eliminate this in your family story, the more engaging it becomes. How to Spot Passive Tense Sentences Once you're in the grammatical editing phase of writing your family history, do a text search for the following words: have, has, had is, was, were, are If an action verb follows these helping verbs, you're frequently staring at passive tense sentences. But, helping verbs do not always indicate passive voice. Passive Voice Checkers Worth Trying Since this may be confusing and difficult to spot in a family story of more than 1,000 words, leverage passive voice checkers to lend a hand. Grammarly I use Grammarly, and have used it for many years to help myself and my children write better reports and stories. While Grammarly has a free option, the passive voice checker is only available through the premium plan. Catching passive tense sentences is one feature worth the expense. Grammarly can work on any website when you're writing. For instance, it will turn on when using Google Docs, Facebook, or other websites where you can type a comment. You will often spot Grammarly suggestions in my videos on Family History Fanatics and Write Your Family History. When you use passive voice, Grammarly highlights the problem and recommends changing the sentence. However, you’ll need to write these changes yourself. ↪️ Are you looking for more genealogy resources? Grab a copy of our FREE Genealogy Research and Writing Guides: Hemingway App This free tool not only highlights and counts your use of passive voice. The goal in many projects is to use two or fewer instances of passive tense. Apparently, it will give you suggestions to avoid wordy sentences and improve your story's readability. The downside to this free tool is that you must copy your text and paste it into the website tool. But, free doesn't always fit into your natural workflow. Pro Writing Aid This tool requires you to sign-up for an account to utilize some free tools or invest in a paid subscription. The free and paid option check for passive voice. What's advantageous is that this tool also offers one-click corrections. You can click on the better choice from several options and fix your problem quickly. It's such a cool tool. I might consider switching from Grammarly to this one. Passive Voice Detector Finally, another web-based tool does what it says it'll do. After you copy and paste (or upload) text into the analyzer, the tool will highlight when you use passive tense. There is also the Zombies Test, which you can turn on to check your sentences. This feature makes editing fun when you can summon the zombies. Additional Writing Improvement Tips What Voice Should I Use When I Write Family Histories? Should You Use Proper English When Writing Family Histories? Best Reason to Share a Proof Copy of Your Family History Stop Repeating Your Ancestor's Names in Family Histories Stop Overusing Pronouns In Your Family History Improve Your Family History With These Passive Voice Checkers Easily Avoid Plagiarism While Writing Genealogy Books